08-20-2018, 02:38 AM | #1 |
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Made my first music video on premiere pro! The song is Reverse-Vic Mensa ft. G-Eazy. It's almost 4am but I wanted to finish this tonight. Sheesh I got a service appointment before work too, probably gonna get stuck with a 320i loaner haha. Anyways hope you guys enjoy the video it was just filmed on my iPhone X and a DJI mavic air drone. Constructive criticism feedback etc is welcome I want to get better.
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08-20-2018, 11:11 AM | #2 |
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Very nice; looking forward to your next one!
Driving scenes were fun and creative. Effects were nicely done and just the right amount to keep it entertaining, IMO. Good photo composition and production, overall. Music was an excellent choice. Helpful suggestions, hmmm. Maybe since you consistently feature the girl, you shouldn't suddenly cut to man-hands on the steering wheel? Biggest 'ding' would be for the occasional actor swapping... keep the viewer focused on your subject. Challenge for you: Next time, try to tell an actual story with the vid, rather than simply showing random clips strung together. Have a beginning, middle, and end. Sort of a lofty goal, but with your solid level of talent you can do it.
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Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it! Yes that was a bit of a challenge since this was my first video I was still getting a handle on the workflow and timing everything. The worst part is when you are trying to replace subpar clips with better ones but you want to keep the timing and everything in place for the clips you like.
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Hehe, lemme check to see if you hit the "Appreciate" button... 🤡
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